Macbeth: A Verse Translation

 

Macbeth: A Verse Translation

ISBN-13: 9780975274385

Full Measure Press

 

Macbeth: A Verse Translation

 

My verse translation of Macbeth has the same sentence complexity and vocabulary range as Shakespeare's original. All blank verse lines remain in verse with accurate and authentic iambic pentameter. Songs and rhymes are translated but maintain the same rhythm and rhyme patterns.

 

Play Statistics

  Unique words in Shakespeare's original: 3,255

  Unique words in Richmond's translation: 3,290

 

Excerpt

  from Act Four

 

 

Scene One. A Dark Cave with a Cauldron

[Thunder. Enter the three WITCHES]

FIRST WITCH

Thrice the banded cat’s meowed.

SECOND WITCH

Thrice, and once the hedge-hog whined.

THIRD WITCH

The harpy cries “It’s time, it’s time.

FIRST WITCH

Round and round, you cauldron, spin;

Throw the poisoned entrails in.

Toads, that under cold stone lay,

Thirty nights and one more day

Till the sweated venom’s got,

Boil it first in this charmed pot!

ALL THREE

Double, double, toil and trouble;

Fire burn, and cauldron bubble.

SECOND WITCH

Fillet of swamp-bred snake,

In the caldron boil and bake.

Eye of newt, and toe of frog,

Wool of bat, and tongue of dog,

Adder’s fork, and blind-worm’s sting,

Lizard’s leg, and owlet’s wing,—

For a brew of powerful trouble,

Like a hell-broth boil and bubble.

ALL

Double, double, toil and trouble;

Fire burn, and cauldron bubble.

THIRD WITCH

Scale of dragon, tooth of mutt,

Witch’s mummy, jaw and gut

Of the salty, ravenous shark,

Root of hemlock dug in dark,

Spleen of unbelieving Jew,

Gall of goat, and twigs of yew

Sliced off in the moon’s eclipse,

Nose of Turk, and Tartar’s lips,

Finger from a fetus which

Whores left stillborn in a ditch,

Make the gruel as thick as pitch.

Then we add a tiger’s colon,

To the mixture in our cauldron.

ALL

Double, double, toil and trouble;

Fire burn, and cauldron bubble.

SECOND WITCH

Cool it with a báboon’s blood,

Then the hex is fixed and good.

[Enter HECATE with three of her WITCHES]

HECATE

O, well done! I commend your pains,

And everyone will share the gains.

And now around the cauldron sing,

Like elves and fairies in a ring,

Enchanting all that you put in.

ALL

Song: Black Spirits

 

Black spirits and white

Red spirits and gray;

Mingle, mingle, mingle

You that mingle may.

[Exit HECATE and her three WITCHES]

Around, around, about, about

The bad run in, the good keep out.

SECOND WITCH

There's a tingling in my thumbs,

Something wicked this way comes,

Open, locks, whoever knocks!

[Enter MACBETH]

MACBETH

What’s this, you secret, spooky, midnight hags?

What are you doing?

ALL THREE

                                  A deed without a name.

MACBETH

I call on you and all you claim to know

(No matter how you learned it)—answer me.

Though you unleash the winds and let them fight

Against the steeples, though the frothy waves

Destroy and swallow up armadas whole,

Though ripened corn’s knocked flat and trees blown down,

Though castles topple on their masters’ heads,

Though tops of palaces and pyramids

Collapse on their foundations, though the seed

All nature springs from tumbles all at once

Till devastation sickens of itself,

I need an answer.

FIRST WITCH

                              Speak.

SECOND WITCH

                                         Demand.

THIRD WITCH

                                                       We’ll answer.

FIRST WITCH

Say if you’d rather hear it from our mouths,

Or from our masters.

MACBETH

                                   Call them, let me see them.

FIRST WITCH

Pour in sow’s blood, one that’s eaten

Her nine offspring; grease that‘s beaten

From a murderer’s carcass—fling

Upon the flame.

ALL THREE

                             From far or near

You and your function now appear!

[Thunder. The first APPARITION, a helmeted head, rises]

MACBETH

Tell me, you unknown power….

FIRST WITCH

                                                 He knows your thoughts.

Hear his speech, but do not speak....

 

© 2010 by Kent Richmond