Colleague's name: _________________________________________________________ act poss pts pts CONTENT: A. The context 1. Does your colleague identify the subfield(s) in which his or her proposed project fits? .......... ____ 1 2. Does your colleague develop the intellectual context of the proposed project? In other words, does s/he briefly summarize the existing research on the topic, with an eye to showing how the proposed project might add some necessary or interesting information to that area of study? Are you convinced the student is actually conversant enough with the literature of the chosen subfield to be able to justify and carry out a senior thesis in this area? That is, do you think your colleague has done his or her homework in setting the stage for the senior thesis? One is okay, 2 is good, and 3 is truly excellent. ....... ____ 3 3. Does your colleague indicate why the topic might be important to society, the environ- ment, or the disciplines of geography or planning? ........................................... ____ 2 B. The purpose statement 1. Is this sentence clear and easy to understand? Does it concisely indicate what the proposed project is going to accomplish? 2. Does this sentence imply the approach your colleague will take to tackle the project (does it suggest the sorts of data and methods that might be used)? ............................... ____ 2 C. Data 1. Does the proposal describe the kinds of data your colleague will collect to accomplish the purpose of the project? ............................ ____ 2 2. Will your colleague collect original data on his or her own? OR has the student identified high quality secondary data that s/he plans to subject to original analysis? ....................... ____ 4 3. Does your colleague plan ONLY to use informa- tion already collected and analyzed by other researchers (as in existing articles and books) and just report on it? ...................... ____ -4 D. Methods 1. Does your colleague discuss the methods s/he will use to collect original or secondary data? .... ____ 2 2. Does the proposal mention the specific methods to be used to interpret or analyze these data? ..... ____ 4 E. Feasibility 1. Does the proposal contain a tentative timeline of reasonable activities, properly sequencing what needs to be done to accomplish the pur- pose in a semester's timeframe? .................... ____ 1 2. Do you believe that your colleague can feasibly accomplish the project described in the timeframe of a semester? Really? You can generally tell the student is in trouble if the proposal is filled with fuzzy generalities and evasions or if the project, even if well thought out, is too cosmic and ambitious for an advanced undergraduate to pull off in the frenzy of the senior year. ......................... ____ 2 SUM OF CONTENT: ......................................... ____ 23
WRITING AND DOCUMENTATION MECHANICS: A. Does your colleague follow Annals format in documentation? ......................................... ____ 1 B. Is every reference in the text also in the refer- ence list and vice-versa? .............................. ____ 1 C. Is the paper well-organized and easy to follow? ........ ____ 2 D. Is the spelling perfect? ............................... ____ 2 E. Is the grammar perfect? ................................ ____ 1 F. Is sentence structure correct, complete, and varied? ... ____ 2 G. Is the paper free of potentially sexist usage? ......... ____ 1 SUM OF WRITING AND DOCUMENTATION MECHANICS: ............ ____ 10
SUM OF POINTS (add totals for content and writing): .......... ____ 33 HELPFUL COMMENTS FOR YOUR COLLEAGUE: